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もう初夏を感じる東京近郊
桜は今、新緑になっている
私は今、新たな気持ちになり始めている...
こんにちは
そして共に歩いて行く　

感受初夏的东京近郊
樱花现在是新鲜的绿色
我开始有新的感觉了...
你好
并一起走

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this is a bit bad translation haha. at least the last two sentences are just transliteration.
let me make a better one.

感受到初夏的东京近郊，
樱花变成了新鲜的绿色。
现在开始怀着新的感觉，
你好，一起携手同行吧。

much better isn't it? and the number of characters is even the same with each sentence.

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